Cycling with My Friends

Aug 26, 2015 16:54
In this morning, I went to cycling with my friends.

The distance to the destination was about 40 km.

We ate brunch along the way, and came back around noon.

I ate Kamameshi, which is the famous menu in the land.

There were many variety of ingredients, such as an egg, mushrooms, bamboo shoots and chicken, on the rice.

However, I don't know why an apricot was also put on the rice.

Furthermore, I ate soba and ice cream for storing energy.

I am somewhat tired, but it was fun.
友人とサイクリング

今日の午前、友人とサイクリングに行きました。

片道40km程で、ブランチを食べて昼ごろに戻ってきました。

私は、その土地で有名な釜飯を食べました。

ご飯の上に卵や椎茸、筍や鶏肉など様々な具が乗っていて美味しかったです。

しかし、杏子が乗っていたのはどうかと思いました。

そして、帰路に向けてエネルギーを蓄えるため、おそばとアイスクリームも食べました。

少し疲れましたが、楽しかったです。
No. 1 sbsb's correction
  • Cycling with My Friends
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • In this morning, I went to cycling with my friends.
  • This morning, I went cycling with my friends.
  • The distance to the destination was about 40 km.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • We ate brunch along the way, and came back around noon.
  • We had brunch along the way, and came back around noon.
  • I ate Kamameshi, which is the famous menu in the land.
  • I ate Kamameshi, which is a famous dish in this area.
  • There were many variety of ingredients, such as an egg, mushrooms, bamboo shoots and chicken, on the rice.
  • (In the dish, on top of rice?) There were great variety of ingredients, such as eggs, mushrooms, bamboo shoots and chicken.
  • However, I don't know why an apricot was also put on the rice.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Furthermore, I ate soba and ice cream for storing energy.
  • Furthermore, I ate soba and ice cream for storing energy.
     Maybe a better phrase would be

    Furthermore, I had soba and ice cream "to restore my energy".
  • I am somewhat tired, but it was fun.
  • I am a little tired, but it was fun.
kanotown
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :D
No. 2 greenhouse_potterhead's correction
  • There were many variety of ingredients, such as an egg, mushrooms, bamboo shoots and chicken, on the rice.
  • The dish is made with a variety of ingredients, such as an eggs, mushrooms, bamboo shoots and chicken, on the and rice.
  • Furthermore, I ate soba and ice cream for storing energy.
  • Furthermore I also ate soba and ice cream for storing to get more energy.
That sounds like a nice day! 40KM is a very big distance, good job! :)
kanotown
Thank you very much for the corrections and your comment! :D
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